CREATIVE WRITING

LIFE FOR ME IS LIKE THE SUN!! by Anthony Aguilar

by Anthony Aguilar

         LIFE FOR ME IS LIKE THE SUN!!

when I step out

the church door

I feel brighter than the sun

Swaggin’ out

Fellow members dressed to kill

Colorful like a rainbow

Shades of blue, green, yellow

Happier than no school ‘cause of snow

My time at church makes me happy

And I feel brighter than the sun.

38 Comments

  1. Ms. Herrmann says:

    Outstanding poem Anthony!!! I love all of your similes in your poem. Keep up the strong work

  2. Mr. Minihan says:

    Anthony, it looks like we are uncovering a hidden talent, great job!

  3. E-Zine Editors says:

    I love the feel of this poem, Anthony! I can feel the bright sunshine, see the colorful clothing, and feel your happiness. I like it!!

  4. DragonBreath says:

    Awesome poem, dude. Love the sound of this poem and enjoyed every line!! 🙂

  5. Sadaf Nasiri says:

    Great poem!

  6. this random girl says:

    cool…
    swaggin out.

  7. nice (:

  8. Awesome poem. I like how you said swagging out. 🙂

  9. Nice poem Anthony. You did a nice job on every line!

  10. Erick Oliveira says:

    Nice wording Anthony, it really captured what you were trying to describe!

  11. nice poem anthony

  12. Hmm very interesting

  13. nice poem anthony! very creative and interesting!

  14. yo that’s nice

  15. cool poem I like it

  16. Mrs. O'Rourke says:

    What a gifted poet you are! Nice imagery! I am so proud of you!

  17. good job I didn’t know you could do this – this is terrific

  18. This made me smile! I’m very proud of you. Keep writing. You are fantastic.

  19. Anthony- Great work!!
    I am so proud of you!!!

  20. nice job! #SWAG

  21. Good Poem 😀

  22. this awsome girl says:

    nice job I really like it #swagg I like waffles :p

  23. swaggin out… love it

  24. great job!! 😉

  25. great poem^.^

  26. Great work!

  27. This poem is so happy and silly that it makes me giggle!

  28. Strong work, Anthony. Your choice of imagery is free-swinging and evocative, and the title is totally awesome! Keep it going!

  29. Anthony, what a wonderful poem! You conveyed such powerful emotion.

  30. like the poem

  31. rishitasarin says:

    amazing poem!!!!! 😀

  32. Ms.James says:

    Loved the poem,Anthony. Great Job!

  33. Yonatan Nachum says:

    Dressed to kill. Reminds me of The Matrix LOL

  34. #swaaaaaaaaaaag

  35. Katniss Everdeen says:

    marvelous

  36. I like that, “Swaggin’ out”

  37. Mrs. O'Rourke says:

    Touching poem! Excellent work!

  38. Good job, Anthony!
    I love this poem!
    I’m so late, but I like this poem. First poem I’ve liked I guess. Keep it up you’re awesome! You should do more of these 😉

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